#9

Out of the three assignments we have worked on, I found the advertisement essay difficult. It was very hard to write a 3-4 paper so that the audience can visualize the advertisement without taking a glance at it. I thought it would be one, two, three, and I'm done but I noticed I had spent a lot of time on this essay. And when we usually do peer review so we can recieve feedback, that really didn't help me for this paper. I had to have someone really look over it and get better feedback so I can improve my paper. The easiest essay so far in this class, would probably be the first essay, Literacy narrative. Even though I recieved a horrible grade on it, I still think I had many details and facts for this paper. At first when I wrote this paper I thought I was the only person to write it the way I did, butI wasn't and kind of felt relieved. The peer review group I had then really did well on giving me feedback and reminding me of what needs to be added into my paper. I think I found it easy because it was like a personal experience, so I just jotted down what came to mind for this specific topic. Im not sure why this is so but I think because I was never assigned to visualize an advertisement paper from 3-4 pages. So to really be descriptive and detailed was very difficult to make into 3-4 pages.