#11

in my writing i tend to have a bunch of run on sentence, repeat the same thing in other paragraphs, and having a bunch of ideas not placed in correct order. These three errors I think are my main errors in the paper and they cause a lot of unorganized ideas to be all of over the place. So for the future I would have to spend more time on my papers and really look for the errors and organized my paper much better to recieve a better grade. But at times it gets hard to think how you can anaylze a visual to 5-4 pages, thats why I tend to repeat sentences i have said earlier in the paper.