#14

For my portfolio I decided to revise my ad analysis paper. I picked that essay because that was my highest grade on a paper for this class, so thought I try and improve it for my final paper. My strengths for this would be describing the ad, giving examples about the ad, and having a strong thesis. My weakness for this paper would be not having a clear organized paper, somewhat irrelevant statements, and run on sentences. By revising my paper, I have decided to work on my strengths by making them stronger, having a clearer thesis, try expanding my description of the ad. By doing that, I have decided to brainstorm on paper, put down all m ideas and descriptions of the ad, and think about what other way I can write a better and improved revised paper. For my weaknesses I will try an improve my organization and havinging concise statesmets. By doing that I will re-read my paper to see if it makes sense to the audience, and gives a good tone. In order for my organization to improve I would have to go through my paragraphs to see which follow which.