#12

Topic: Parents give more freedom to their sons and not their daughters. And I dont agree that parents should be more lenient to their sons instead of both sons and daughters. Thesis: I dont agree of boys having the ability to get more freedom from their parents and their daughters get so little of it. Parents should be protective of both kids and give them the same kind of freedom. Compelling Arguement: Why do parents give more freedom to their sons instead of giving the same kind of freedom to both their sons and daughters? Parents have different mindsets of how to raise their children. There are major issues that stop parents giving their daughters more freedom, such as not being able to trust them well enough, being double standard to their kids, sometimes the race-ethnicity playes a huge role in the families as to why parents are strict, another one could be the media. All these major issues are what keep parents from not letting their daughters out and I dont think its fair because anything that can happen to their daughter can also happen to their sons. Such as a girl getting raped, well a boy can get shot or jumped by a gang. Freedom should be played equal to both bos and girls. Weak arguement: Parents worry over their daughters more because they are not known to be tough and be abke to handle their own business. Parents like to be overprotective with their daughters, expecially if shes their only daughter. I understand parents dont want nothing to happen to their daughters becuase there such good girls and dont deserve any violence. Parents dont think the daughters are old enough to hang out with their friends. This is weak because there isnt much to let an audience know about why parents keep their daughters inside rather than out on the streets. I argue that there should be equal freedom because everyone goes throough something, you can be in the right place or wrong place at the right or wrong time, it still will happen to anyone. Parents need to realize that they should give their trust out in order to see what their daughters can do with it.